Brasilia

This is a correction for a Sebastian's post: 

(Original)
In 2010, I had the opportunity to visit one of the most relevant metropolis in the modern architecture’s history, the Brazil’s capitol, Brasilia. 

I traveled with a bunch of FAU’s students, some of them my best friends, and  take us a lot of hours to arrive because of the bad airline organization (worst airline ever).

One of the main reasons for my visit was the Latin-American encounter of architecture’s students, a massive celebration which each year congregate thousands of young people around the same topic, architecture/urbanism. But, obviously, a lot of young stressed students cannot only talk about their careers, so parties were a must.

The daily schedule was divided between seminaries, workshops, forums, guided visits and parties, so we were active all the time for a period of 7 days (yeah, a whole week). That give us the chance to learn how actually work a modern city and most important, meet people from all over the continent, from Brazilians to Peruvians, Paraguayans etc., contacts that continue even today.

(Corrected Version) 
In 2010, I had the opportunity to visit one of the most relevant metropolis in the  modern architecture’s history/W.O/ (history of modern architecture), the Brazil’s capitol; Brasilia.

I traveled with a bunch of FAU’s students, some of them my best friends, and λ take/T/ (It took) us a lot of hours to arrive because of the bad airline organization (λ(the) worst airline ever).

One of the main reasons for my visit was the Latin-American encounter of architecture’s students, a massive celebration which each year congregate/C/ (congregates) thousands of young people around the same topic, architecture/urbanism. But, obviously, a lot of young stressed students/W.O/ (stressed young students) cannot only talk about their careers, so parties were a must.

The daily schedule was divided between seminaries, workshops, forums, guided visits and parties, so we were active all the time for a period of 7 days (yeah, a whole week). That give/T/ (gave) us the chance to learn how actually work a modern city/W.O/ (how the modern city actually work) and λ (the) most important λ (thing), meet people from all over the continent, from Brazilians to Peruvians, Paraguayans etc., contacts that continue even today.


-Sebastian, this is with a lot respect, sorry if I didn't understand any idea or I had a mistake when I corrected the text n.n